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About Me Official Beta Tester Fantasy Writer Amriah18/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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I love photography! With the advent of my recent DSLR camera purchase, this folder has gotten larger and shows no signs of stopping. =)

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I love to write, read, play guitar, and hang out/play around with my fiancé. Stories flow out of my head and onto paper constantly! I'm engaged, love the sound of waves crashing against the rocks, and the feeling of the wind against my face.

Simply put, I am me.

Star Trek

Thu Nov 19, 2009, 4:48 PM


Is awesome
J.J. Abrams did a great job.
Been Busy
My mom just left to go back to Houston; she was here from Saturday 'til last Wednesday. I miss her and she managed to help me find a set way for college and my wedding! We're moving the latter to Houston because we want to avoid John's family and we have no friends here. I, however, have an entire family begging me to have the wedding in a place they can go--home. So, we're planning on having it at my old middle school. I spent 9 years at that place; it is very beloved.

As for college, we went to California State University Fresno on Monday, I think. We took a tour, found out some great things, and I was sold. It was cheaper than the previous school I wanted to go to and far superior. Their library was brand new and had 4 floors. :giggle:. I wanted to get lost in it right then and there but contained myself. So, the plan is to go to city college for basics then to Fresno State as they call it for my BA in English then my MFA in Creative Writing. I'll be a Bulldog... I hate bulldogs. I want to give them all inhalers and facial reconstruction. :XD:
In Other News
Adverbs are a pain! I'm in a distance education program. In essence, I am both teacher and student. This can be very hard and frustrating. I can't afford a tutor; my mother has been gracious enough to pay for the program itself and I won't impose on that kindness by asking for more cash. The program does state that you can e-mail your teachers to ask questions, but they generally take days to reply and answer a question with a question (ex: what is an adverb? The reply would be something along the lines of "what kind of questions should you ask to find an adverb?"). I don't ask questions unless I am truly stumped. Answering a question with a question so I can simply refer to my textbook (which I have already scoured countless times for the answer) is pathetic. What happened to teaching? Sure, I'm in a distance program but teaching is still possible. These teachers say to either get a tutor or re-read the book or guess. Guess! Stupid high school...
Friday Night
Is going to be eventful! John and I are going to River Park (on the eve of New Moon's release, no less) for the first time as a vendor for their Christmas farmer's market of sorts. Arts and crafts vendors (like us) and farmers still selling produce (or donuts for some reason) are welcomed. If you live in Fresno and know someone struggling that is in this line of work, direct them to River Park on Friday night around 6pm to talk to the guy in charge.

But I'm so excited! We're going to be selling Intimate Journey: Battle Scars as well as buttons, bumper stickers, and poetry art (our main product). We want to make a nice gift affordable for Christmas for those struggling with the economy. California has been hit especially hard by its own political pomp aside from the federal farts. I just felt God calling me to do this--well, John and I (mostly John). =)
How are all of You?
Tell me! I've been out of the loop for a while.

Love,
=Amriah

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  • Mood: Mad
  • Listening to: Falling Up
  • Watching: Star Trek
  • Playing: Psh, I don't play any video games anymore
  • Eating: Chicken, rice, and peas. Yay for healthy foods
  • Drinking: Dr. Pepper. Not so healthy.

What do you think of the technical side of English? 

48%
16 deviants said It's a mandatory facet of writing and language.
21%
7 deviants said Bah humbug.
12%
4 deviants said What technical side?
12%
4 deviants said A mix of these (please comment)
6%
2 deviants said Other (you comment, too)

Book I've Found Helpful

:pointr: Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer by Roy Peter Clark.
This book has helped me the most out of all the other reference books! It makes sense, explains in a concise way (or at least in a way I can understand), and is funny. What more can you ask for in a how-to-write book?

:pointr: Painless Grammar by Rececca Elliot, PhD.
This is a middle school/high school grammar book. However, I've been reading through it and found that I have been making basic grammar mistakes all the time. This is a non-boring way to learn (or re-learn) the basics of grammar.

:pointr: The Elements of Style by William Strunk, Jr.
This is the original Elements of Style, written in 1918. There are other, more recent copies (the later ones are written by William Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White) for sale but this one is online and free so enjoy.

I'll add more to this as my collection grows. This is the basics and more than enough material for the beginning (or intermediate) writer.

Recent Writing

:pointr: The Laprun Trials (perspectives practice)
:pointr: Contest Entry: Christmas Unity (creative nonfiction attempt)
:pointr: Workshop: He was the Nail (extended metaphor workshop/prose)
:pointr: Workshop: Iced Tea (extended metaphor workshop/open poetry)
:pointr: No More Games (spoken word/poetry)
:pointr:That is all We Need (uber mushy short short romance scene)
:pointr: The Kilvern (flash fiction/fantasy)

Comments


:iconpiechot:
:wave: Thanks a million for the :+fav: on [link] :w00t: I'm really glad you like the shot :aww:

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my photo gallery [link]
:iconamriah:
Oh, I loved that picture! How'd you pull that angle off (because it seems a little complex to me, but I'm an amateur photographer).

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Check out my publishing business's first book:pointr: Intimate Journey: Battle Scars
:icongaioumonbatou:
Thanks for the collect! :hug:

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""Draw ten naked straight men in a pile." Best entry wins a trip to the revival of The Wizard of Oz on broadway." - `koffeeben
:iconpaperdart:
Thank you for the watch. It is reciprocated, as you have a lovely gallery. :D

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