A gentle word
Turns into a loving caress
The way you look at me
Leaves me bereft
Of any coherent thoughts
Anything but your smile
In this euphoric moment
I am yours for all time
On to Number Three: Light | Missed Out? Start at the Beginning
A gentle word Turns into a loving caress The way you look at me Leaves me bereft Of any coherent thoughts Anything but your smile In this euphoric moment I am yours for all time On to Number Three: Light | Missed Out? Start at the Beginning |
Author's Comments
I know, I know this is horrendously short but I like it! It's my nice attempt at poetry.
*I give *100ThemesChallenge permission to submit this to their gallery |
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Comments
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why can we change a person but not people?
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and the shortness of it just emphasizes the point you made
it flows beauitfully
and the structure and puntuation and line breaks you chose are flawless!
you should DEFINATELY write more poetry ^^
oh, and i love the vocab you used
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i figured i'd tell you WHY i loved it!
oh that reminds me...
gotta go
yeah i went and checked it out!
i love that place!
and i believe you do,
it just seemed so natural and so not forced, like some things do
and don't worry, i don't have any sense of meter or rhythm according to my friends
but you never know until you try!!
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I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!
new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
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