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I dive, breathing in revival
If this is light, I'm eclipsed
By the continuing beat and wish
Such radiance existed in all corners
Of reality
Have you ever had that moment of awe and bliss when you're listening to one of your favorite songs?

For me this moment came during this song, 3:28-5:08. The entire thing is just pure energy and passion, but that's my favorite part and the inspiration for this poem.

Hope you like it; I hardly write poetry, especially stuff this short.
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simplyfeel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can imagine this poem as verse in a techno or dupstep song in the club. I guess that's why it's called "Techno Diving," right?
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Yep! That and I wrote it whilst listening to a techno song, so yeah. :)
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Kira73 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This piece has been featured here --> [link]

:heart: KM
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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Kira73 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very welcome. :)
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Solaris-Ember Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is lovely. I can absolutely understand what you mean. You really captured that experience.
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you. I am so glad you like it. :aww:
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Solaris-Ember Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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Izzie-67 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yes. I've had those moments and, I must say, you've captured it pretty well. Love it!
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. :D
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