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I dive, breathing in revival
If this is light, I'm eclipsed
By the continuing beat and wish
Such radiance existed in all corners
Of reality
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Techno Diving by Amriah

/ / / ©2010-2015 Amriah
Have you ever had that moment of awe and bliss when you're listening to one of your favorite songs?

For me this moment came during this song, 3:28-5:08. The entire thing is just pure energy and passion, but that's my favorite part and the inspiration for this poem.

Hope you like it; I hardly write poetry, especially stuff this short.
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simplyfeel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can imagine this poem as verse in a techno or dupstep song in the club. I guess that's why it's called "Techno Diving," right?
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Yep! That and I wrote it whilst listening to a techno song, so yeah. :)
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Kira73 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This piece has been featured here --> [link]

:heart: KM
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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Kira73 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very welcome. :)
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Solaris-Ember Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is lovely. I can absolutely understand what you mean. You really captured that experience.
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you. I am so glad you like it. :aww:
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Solaris-Ember Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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Izzie-67 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yes. I've had those moments and, I must say, you've captured it pretty well. Love it!
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Amriah Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. :D
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