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My first large-scale photomanipulation. Full view for detail.

Background by ~Fallen-Spark

Sword by~In-Front

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I have seen these kind of things all over in my life, but a photograph or a sword in a stone? I have never seen one like this in my life and I am happy to find it^^. I love the background and the impact, but I think you would need some lightning because it looks way too dark in the picture. I also recommend you should taken the picture a bit further because I think this was the way you missed out the lightning in the picture. This picture somewhat brings me memories of my past in my childhood.
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:iconleurindal:
Let us await Arthur in silence...

I like this :)

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:iconbrynsilverhorn:
I like it! Very well done!
You should do more like this.
:)

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:iconpump-kin-pie:
Ohh, I thought it was an actual set up picture :)
The lightning is very well done, and there is this queerness about it that makes the "magic". :meow:

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:iconilluminara:
Nice one!

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:icongellidius:
for me, what i think does not work is the sky;
the blue is magenta and the clouds are cyan; a bad mixture that does not go well together. cyan clouds for me are poison.
if you could modify that, i think the whole would come out much better.
also, the sky color has bled onto the tree branches.
the scene as shown is nice and interesting, it's mainly the colors that take away the overall quality. it could pass as a badly developped shot taken with a cheap Polaroid camera.
lighting is good.
:iconamriah:
I agree with you. The problem is that I'm new to photo-manipulation, and lighting/coloring is tricky. :XD:. Thank you so much for the feedback! :hug:

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:iconamriah:
Thank you! It's my first photo-manip doing this sort of thing. The pen tool is your friend! :XD:

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:iconamriah:
:hug:. Thank you. I want to do more like this; I just need to find the time! :XD:

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